Composition(20pts): 15 Hints at a foreground, middle, background, adding the grass helped.
Contrast (20pts): 15.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 19
Craftsmanship (20pts): 15- it feels like you are putting in a lot of time cutting through these thick surfaces but we really can't see the color underneath. I like that you added the grass (to make the grass look more sophisticated and less young, I'd add some blades vertically) It needs something else to break up the space like a bird? That would echo your cut marks as well (flying bird shape) I'd add at least two.
Creativity (10pts): 5 I still feel feel like you need more of a concept as you near the end. Why trees? Make it personal. Your family ranch maybe?
Classroom Ethics (10) 5 late Grade 74
I am so pleased that you brought in your next piece ready to cut. I liked it. Try to keep unified colors from here on out. wonder if you could take a picture of a white tree close up and then convert to black and white? Or maybe layer a cut photo over colored copy of a cut paper piece? See your Pinterest board. I know you need to work quickly so throwing some things out there. You are going to have a nice portfolio.
ReplyDeleteComposition(20pts): 15 Hints at a foreground, middle, background, adding the grass helped.
Contrast (20pts): 15.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 19
Craftsmanship (20pts): 15- it feels like you are putting in a lot of time cutting through these thick surfaces but we really can't see the color underneath. I like that you added the grass (to make the grass look more sophisticated and less young, I'd add some blades vertically) It needs something else to break up the space like a bird?
That would echo your cut marks as well (flying bird shape) I'd add at least two.
Creativity (10pts): 5 I still feel feel like you need more of a concept as you near the end. Why trees? Make it personal. Your family ranch maybe?
Classroom Ethics (10) 5 late
Grade 74
I am so pleased that you brought in your next piece ready to cut. I liked it. Try to keep unified colors from here on out.
wonder if you could take a picture of a white tree close up and then convert to black and white?
Or maybe layer a cut photo over colored copy of a cut paper piece? See your Pinterest board.
I know you need to work quickly so throwing some things out there.
You are going to have a nice portfolio.