Composition(20pts): 15 Good foreground, middle, and the close up shows more of a background.
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 20- Nice silhouette with the shadows! Great detail.
Creativity (10pts): 10 I love the feeling and complexity this brings.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): Late but excellent! 90
I hope you will view all the pieces together and try and have these culminate into some sort of visual order. Is it black and white to color? less complex to more? real to abstract? or something else? Theses next few pieces will be key. I am so very happy with this piece and the fact that it can be two pieces really says a lot! Great work Carson!!!
Composition(20pts): 15 Good foreground, middle, and the close up shows more of a background.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 20- Nice silhouette with the shadows! Great detail.
Creativity (10pts): 10 I love the feeling and complexity this brings.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): Late but excellent!
90
I hope you will view all the pieces together and try and have these culminate into some sort of visual order. Is it black and white to color? less complex to more? real to abstract? or something else?
Theses next few pieces will be key. I am so very happy with this piece and the fact that it can be two pieces really says a lot! Great work Carson!!!